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  • DEMO LINK

  • TEST REPORT LINK

  • All components follow BEM and use SCSS

  • Repeated sizes and special colors are put to variables

  • Grid is used for the columns

  • Cards are shown in 1, 2, 3, or 4 columns based on screen resolution

  • All changes on :hover are smooth

  • Code follows all the Code Style Rules ❗️

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Thank you for your hard work on this project! 😊 While you've done a great job overall, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve the pull request:

  1. Undefined Variables and Mixins: There are several instances where variables like $catalog__card-width, $page-design-color, and $nav-links-color, as well as the square mixin, are used but not confirmed to be defined in your SCSS files. This will lead to compilation errors and needs to be fixed.

  2. Image Paths: Please ensure that all image paths are correct and that the images exist at those locations. Incorrect paths will result in images not displaying correctly.

  3. Duplicate Content: The product cards are repeated multiple times with identical content. Consider using a JavaScript template or loop to dynamically generate these cards, which will make your code cleaner and easier to maintain.

  4. Accessibility Improvements: Improve the alt text for images to enhance accessibility. Descriptive alt texts are important for screen readers and should accurately describe the image content.

Once these issues are resolved, your code will be in great shape! Keep up the good work, and feel free to reach out if you need any help. 🚀

✨ Please rate this review in the Platform's notification center. I will be grateful for your feedback! ✨

🔄 Fix the issues, commit the changes, and then re-request my review using the Re-request review button in the Reviewers tab.

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</div>
<div class="catalog__card card">
<img
class="card__image"
src="images/imac.jpeg"
alt="logo"
/>
<div class="card__title">
APPLE A1419 iMac 27" Retina
<br />
5K Monoblock (MNED2UA/A)
</div>
<div class="card__product-code">Product code: 195434</div>
<div class="card__rating-field">
<div class="stars stars--4">
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
</div>
<div class="card__rating-text">Reviews: 5</div>
</div>
<div class="card__price-field">
<div class="card__price-field-text">Price:</div>
<div class="card__price-field-number">$2,199</div>
</div>
<a
class="card__buy-link"
href="#buy"
>
BUY
</a>
</div>
<div class="catalog__card card">
<img
class="card__image"
src="images/imac.jpeg"
alt="logo"
/>
<div class="card__title">
APPLE A1419 iMac 27" Retina
<br />
5K Monoblock (MNED2UA/A)
</div>
<div class="card__product-code">Product code: 195434</div>
<div class="card__rating-field">
<div class="stars stars--4">
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
</div>
<div class="card__rating-text">Reviews: 5</div>
</div>
<div class="card__price-field">
<div class="card__price-field-text">Price:</div>
<div class="card__price-field-number">$2,199</div>
</div>
<a
class="card__buy-link"
href="#buy"
>
BUY
</a>
</div>
<div class="catalog__card card">
<img
class="card__image"
src="images/imac.jpeg"
alt="logo"
/>
<div class="card__title">
APPLE A1419 iMac 27" Retina
<br />
5K Monoblock (MNED2UA/A)
</div>
<div class="card__product-code">Product code: 195434</div>
<div class="card__rating-field">
<div class="stars stars--4">
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
<div class="stars__star"></div>
</div>
<div class="card__rating-text">Reviews: 5</div>
</div>
<div class="card__price-field">
<div class="card__price-field-text">Price:</div>
<div class="card__price-field-number">$2,199</div>
</div>
<a
class="card__buy-link"
href="#buy"
>
BUY
</a>
</div>

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The product cards from line 154 to 384 are identical in content. Consider using a template or a loop in your JavaScript to dynamically generate these cards to avoid repetition and make future updates easier.

href="#logo"
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<img
src="images/logo.png"

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Ensure that the image path 'images/logo.png' is correct and the image is available at this location. Otherwise, the logo might not display correctly.

>
<img
class="card__image"
src="images/imac.jpeg"

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Ensure that the image path 'images/imac.jpeg' is correct and the image is available at this location. Otherwise, the product image might not display correctly.

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<img
src="images/logo.png"
alt="logo"

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Consider providing a more descriptive alt text for the logo image to improve accessibility. Instead of 'logo', use something like 'Company Logo'.

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<img
class="card__image"
src="images/imac.jpeg"
alt="logo"

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Consider providing a more descriptive alt text for the product image to improve accessibility. Instead of 'logo', use something like 'Image of APPLE A1419 iMac 27" Retina'.

}

.nav__link:hover {
color: $page-design-color;

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The variable $page-design-color is used here, but ensure that it is defined elsewhere in your SCSS files. If not, this will cause a compilation error.

height: 16px;
width: 16px;
margin-right: 4px;
background-image: url(../images/star.svg);

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Ensure that the image path '../images/star.svg' is correct and the image is available at this location. Otherwise, the star icons might not display correctly.

.stars--3 .stars__star:nth-child(-n + 3),
.stars--4 .stars__star:nth-child(-n + 4),
.stars--5 .stars__star:nth-child(-n + 5) {
background-image: url(../images/star-active.svg);

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Ensure that the image path '../images/star-active.svg' is correct and the image is available at this location. Otherwise, the active star icons might not display correctly.

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@import './utils/reset';
@import './utils/normalize';
@import './utils/variables';
@import './utils/colors';
@import './utils/mixins';
@import './blocks/catalog';
@import './blocks/header';
@import './blocks/stars';

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Ensure that all the imported SCSS files ('reset', 'normalize', 'variables', 'colors', 'mixins', 'catalog', 'header', 'stars') exist in the specified paths. Missing files will cause compilation errors.

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@mixin square($size) {
grid-template-columns: repeat($size, $catalog__card-width);

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Ensure that the variable $catalog__card-width is defined elsewhere in your SCSS files. If not, this will cause a compilation error when the mixin is used.

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